Young Writer 2018-2019 P.4

Place: 1st place

Class: 4A

Name: Heidi Chu

The Day of the Witch

Once upon a time there was a kind witch who lived in a candy house in the dark forest. She felt very lonely because she didn't have friends. One day, evil Hansel and Gretel went into the forest and they saw the witch’s house. The witch’s house was made of candy and they felt hungry so they started to eat it. Then the 'M&M Legion' saw them and told the witch. The witch used her 'Magic Marshmallows' to fight Hansel and Gretel but they had a 'Big Bad Magic Wand' to fight back. So the witch used her unique skill 'Five Brothers Pencil' to shoot them. They ran as fast as they could but they still got hit by the pencil. Then they fell down and felt dizzy. Afterwards, the witch took out her favourite 'Sweet Marshmallows'. Hansel and Gretel were put into a giant pot and waited to be cooked by the witch. In the end, the witch ate them and the witch got transformed into a beautiful princess because she had a spell from Hansel and Gretel. Then she married a handsome prince and lived happily ever after.

The end.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 4A

Name: Bambi

The False Tooth House 

Once upon a time, there were two evil children who were called Hansel and Gretel. They were twins. One day, they saw an old witch with a beautiful necklace. "How can we get the witch's necklace?" Said Hansel. "We can build a false tooth house because I think the witch needs false teeth" said Gretel. Then, they built a false teeth house and the witch came in. "Umm…I need to borrow some new false teeth. Hey! It is a false teeth shop in front of me. Oh, it is free! Let me get five!" Hansel and Gretel think, "Oh it is too great, we can take the necklace!" Then the witch said, "Can I get five free false teeth?" "No, we need your necklace and then we can give you some free false teeth!" the children said. "Help, there are some evil children, Hansel and Gretel!" the witch screamed. Usually when all the people see them, they will also scream. The children used a magic wand and locked the witch up. She whistled once, her dog ran to the false teeth shop and bit the children. In the end, the dog took the children deep into the forest and the witch with the dog lived happily ever after. 


Place: 3rd place

Class: 4A

Name: Leanna Fung

Once upon a time, there were two bunnies. They were called Hansel and Gretel. They were very naughty. Everyone in the town hated them. One day, they were bored, so they went to a pond and played. They saw a kind witch eating her lunch. Hansel and Gretel were hungry. They pushed the kind witch into the pond and stole her lunch. The witch was angry so she waved her magic wand and turned Hansel and Gretel into ugly old toads. Hansel and Gretel never stole again. The kind witch lived happily ever after and everyone in the town hates toads.

Place: 1st place

Class: 4B

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Place: 2nd place

Class: 4B

Name: Chung Hong Yuet, Leanna

Good vs Evil

Once upon a time, there was a bad girl and a bad boy called Gretel and Hansel, who had a magic cat. They were cooking magic soup to fight with the kind witch and got the key and the golden box to have more money. At night, Hansel and Gretel used the magic broom to go where the witch lived, Candy Cave. When they arrived, the witch and her pet dragon were sleeping. The dragon discovered Gretel so they woke up! The witch sprayed lots of pepper on their body so they couldn’t see anything. Suddenly, the witch cast a super magic spell. She said, “Bad kids! Boom!” Hansel and Gretel couldn’t say anything. Instantly, Hansel and Gretel’s friend, the magic cat, quickly cast a super magic spell on the kind witch! The witch felt very sick and she fell down. “Why are you so greedy?” shouted the dragon, he angrily ran out of the Candy Cave. The dragon took out his magic stick and said, “Fire!!” His magic stick became fire. Dragon threw the fire at Hansel and Gretel and they died. In the end, the dragon cast a magic spell and the kind witch woke up. Then, the witch and the dragon turned the bad magic cat into a cute, lovely cat. After that, the witch, the dragon, and the cat lived in the Candy Cave happily ever after.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 4B

Name: O CHeuk Hei, Jason

The Witch and the Dragon

Once upon a time, there was a witch who lived in a candy house. One day, a boy called Hansel and a girl called Gretel went to the candy house. A kind lady came out and said, ‘Please come in!’ But Hansel and Gretel thought she was ugly so they wanted to kill the witch. After, they took a big pot and put the witch inside. Suddenly, the witch used her spell to fly out of the candy house. In the end, her friend Dragon, flew out and blew fire at Hansel and Gretel. They never went back to the candy house and the witch and the dragon lived happily ever after.

Place: 1st place

Class: 4C

Name: Anissa Choi

Stepmother – the Hero

Once upon a time, in a magical village, there was a poor family with two little naughty kids called Hansel and Gretel. One day, the father wanted to kill the beautiful rich witch in the woods, so he can be very rich. He told the idea to the kids and off they went to the woods. They took out their magic wands and cast a spell on the witch…the witch died! When the stepmother noticed that, she quickly ran to the woods. She broke all of their magic wands and locked them in a cage. The spell broke and the witch was back. In the end, the witch gave the stepmother a lot of money and they lived happily ever after.

The end.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 4C

Name: Would Lam

The witch and the Stepmother

Once upon a time, there was a fat witch and a stepmother. The stepmother wanted to have a birthday party for her kids – Hansel and Gretel. But one day, the kids and their father ate some poisoned candy, so they were bad from now on. They ran to the witch and their stepmother’s big-flying-bird house and killed their guards, and also broke their house. The bad thing is they cooked the witch! The stepmother wasn’t scared. She took the witch’s wooden wand and said a spell. ‘Boom!’ The witch was alive again! The witch took the wand angrily from the stepmother. She used the wand to point to the kids and their father and say a long spell to lock them in a big cave. She didn’t kill the kids and father so the stepmother wouldn’t be sad. And they lived happily ever after.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 4C

Name: Kylie Tsang Ka Mei

The Good Witch

Once upon a time, the two naughty kids – Hansel and Gretel ran into a forest. They played and played. Then, they saw a house made of yummy desserts. They went to the house and ate them. They saw a witch who wanted to go back to her house but the kids had eaten it. The naughty kids felt scared because the witch may scold them. So, they caught the kind witch and rudely threw her into her little hut. Later, they walked away. The witch said a magic spell and she was out of the hut. She found the naughty kids and wanted them to apologise to her. But they didn’t. So, the witch said she will turn them into rats. The kids loved each other and they didn’t want each other to turn into rats so they apologised to her. The gentle witch forgives them, and the kids turn kind. They lived happily ever after.

Place: 1st place

Class: 4D

Name: Kyle Lee

Hansel and Gretel

Once upon a time, there was a candy house, where a kind witch lived. Then one day, evil Hansel and Gretel were bored so they went to a candy house and stole the cookies. But before they could go in, the kind witch came in and magically turned herself into a dragon that breathes fire. Then the kind witch said, ‘Put down my cookies! Or else I will burn you!’ Hansel and Gretel were so scared so they ran away. The kind witch didn’t turn back into normal so she found a brave dragon to live with because she wanted to protect her. Then whenever they do something, they will do it together. And they lived happily ever after.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 4D

Name: Isaac Chow

The Kind Stepmother and an Evil Man

Once upon a time, there was a kind stepmother who married an evil woodcutter. They had two children, Hansel and Gretel. Hansel and Gretel and the woodcutter treated the stepmother badly. They hit her with their fists, kicked her with their legs and hit them with a pan. They would do that every single day. One day when the stepmother was sleeping, Hansel and Gretel went to the woodcutter’s bedroom. Hansel and Gretel said, ‘We have a plan for killing the stepmother. We will take her deep into the forest and kill her.’ The woodcutter said, ‘This is a great plan. You two hit her to the ground and I will kill her using a rope.’ The stepmother heard what they said and she prepared a knife to cut the rope. The next day, the woodcutter said, ‘We will go hiking today.’ They walked deep into the forest. Suddenly, the woodcutter pulled out a rope. Hansel and Gretel hit her to the floor, the woodcutter used the rope to choke her and ran away. The stepmother used the knife to cut the rope and she ran away. Then she found a candy house. There was a kind woman. After finishing a feast, she said, “I married an evil man because I wanted him to be good and he wants to kill me and he has horrible children too.” The stepmother said, “Can you give me some food?” The old woman replied, “Of course!” She used her magic wand to make an enormous meal and she used the wand to build a house too. The witch said, “Trap the evil man and the horrible children into a wooden shed.” And the witch and the stepmother lived happily ever after.  


Place: 3rd place

Class: 4D

Name: Joyce Choi

Good and Lucky Witch

Once upon a time, Hansel and Gretel loved to eat candy. One day, they walked into the forest when they saw a candy house. A young witch came out and says, ‘No, don’t eat my house, no!’ But they don’t listen. Later, they ate all the candy house, the young witch was sad because she had nowhere to live. Suddenly, a fairy came. He used his magic spell to five the young witch a new candy house and kill Hansel and Gretel. Then, the young witch loved him and the fairy loved her too, so the fairy married the young witch. In the end, they lived happily ever after.

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