Young Writer 2017-2018 P.5

Place: 1st place

Class: 5A

Name: Wan Hei Yiu Hailey

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school, when they heard a loud 'THUD!' "Help! Help! Somebody help me! Help!" Daisy and Danny quickly rushed to where the crying was coming from. They went to the cycling trail and saw a man laying down in the dirt. He injured himself badly, so Daisy and Danny went to help him. "What happened?" Asked Daisy worriedly. "I was riding my bicycle when I bumped into the tree and fell down. I…. I think I broke my leg, explained the man softly." "Oh no!" Gasped Danny. "We should call for an ambulance right now" he said.

"Daisy! Please look for a public telephone and dial '999'" "I will stay here and look after him" Danny said very quickly. Daisy ran to the nearest public telephone while Danny took his jacket off and put it over the man's shoulders. He also took a first aid kid out of his backpack and helped him bandage his minor wounds. "You are a very good boy. I hope you will continue helping others in need" said the man gently. "Thank you!" Replied Danny blushing. Daisy finally found a public telephone and dialed '999'immediately. "There was an accident on Sunshine Road cycling trail, and a man broke his leg!" Daisy shouted.

The ambulance arrived, and the nurses help the man into the ambulance. They rushed to the hospital and gave the man the necessary treatment to help with his broken leg. "Thank you so much for your help!" Exclaimed the man. "You are welcome" Daisy and Danny replied.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 5A

Name: Fung Sze Yin

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. Suddenly, they heard a noise. A man was crying for help! They noticed that the sound was coming from a cycling trail nearby. Finally, they saw a cyclist near the path. He said, "I was riding my bicycle when I crashed over a rock. I fell down and I think I broke my leg." Daisy and Danny were shocked.

Daisy quickly looked for a phone. Suddenly, she saw a woman nearby. She ran over to the woman and asked. "May I borrow your phone please?" Luckily, the woman was kind and borrowed her phone to Daisy. Daisy dialed '999' and thanked the woman. On the other hand, Danny took care of the cyclist. He took of his jacket and gave it to the cyclist to keep himself warm. The cyclist was really thankful.

Within minutes, the ambulance arrived. The cyclist was send to the hospital. He thanked Daisy and Danny before he left. Daisy and Danny was very proud of what they did. They were in the newspaper, and they were thrilled about it.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 5A

Name: Liu Yat Ching

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny was on the way to school. They were almost late to catch the bus, so they were running to the bus stop. Suddenly, they heard a terrible cry. "Ouch! That hurts!" They looked everywhere and saw a man lying beside the cycle trail crying for help.

They rushed down to him. Danny found out that the man broke his leg. The man said in a tired voice, "I… I fell of my bicycle. Please can you help me? I beg you please!" "Right!" Daisy dialed '999' while Danny put his jacket over the man's shoulders. Daisy said to the operator "A man broke his leg at Tai Po, Happy Valley cycle trail, he is in a lot of pain and he needs help" she said in a distressing voice.

One minute later, and ambulance came and took the man to hospital. The man thanked the children for their help and said goodbye to them. They went back to school. That night, the man they helped was on the news! He was sitting on the bed and said happily "Today I was doing sports before hurting my leg. Thank you to the two teenagers that came and to help me. If it wasn't for them I might still be lying by the cycle trail." Then, Daisy shouted "Hey, that is why he looks familiar to me, he is Lee Ka Shing. He retired two days ago. I think he was doing exercise, and then he broke his leg. He should take someone with him as he is quite old."

Place: 1st place

Class: 5B

Name: Oh Eun Young Charmeine

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. Then, suddenly they heard a man crying for help loudly. "Did you hear that, Daisy?" asked Danny. Daisy said "Yeah, that was very loud. I wonder what it was?" They didn't think much of it, until they saw the man lying there with his bike on the ground and his phone next to him. "Oh, gosh! We have to help him, he looks badly injured!" said Danny. Daisy went closer to look at him, I think he broke his leg, he is very weak and can barely speak. "I think he was cycling when he fell over" said Danny while he takes of his jacket on put it on the man. Daisy said, "We need to call an ambulance!" Daisy was about to use the man's phone when she realized it wasn't working.

"I'll rush back home and use the phone to call for an ambulance!" said Daisy and rushed back home as fast as she can. Danny was taking good care of the man, when he saw the ambulance arriving. "Don't worry Mr.! They will fix your leg in no time!" said Danny confidently. The man rushed to hospital.

After school, Daisy and Danny went to visit man in hospital. "I am feeling much better now. Thank you for your help!' said the man. Danny and Daisy were feeling proud of themselves for doing the right thing.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 5B

Name: Kong Hiu Yu

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. They were late, so they had to run as quickly as they can. On there way to school, they suddenly heard a man crying for help. "Help! Is anybody out there? I crashed over a pile of rocks." Yelled the man loudly.

However, Danny and Daisy found him on the cycle trail. "Are you ok? Are you hurt?" Asked Danny with a shaking voice. "An hour ago, my bike crashed into a big rock, and I jumped of my bicycle." So, I broke my left leg, and I am in so much pain now. I broke my phone, and I am unable to make a phone call. When, Daisy and Danny realized what had happened, Danny took of his jacket on put it on the man to keep him warm. Then, he told Daisy to go back home and dial 999.

In the end, the ambulance arrived and took the man to hospital. "Thank you for helping me. You are amazing!" said the man. Danny and Daisy were proud of themselves, because they saved that man. They should be the next Super Heroes.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 5B

Name: Lai Cheuk Yee

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school, when they heard a weak voice crying for help. They looked down the cycle trail and saw a man lying there with a broken leg.

Daisy and Danny ran down quickly. They wanted to dial '999' but the man has broken his phone. Daisy ran off to look for a mobile phone when Danny took of his jacket and put it over the man to keep him nice and warm. The man looked at Danny and said, "Thank you, young man!" On the other side of the road, Daisy went to the nearest Seven/ Eleven to look for a phone. At last, she finds one and dial '999'. Daisy said, 'Please come to Happy Street!"

At nine o'clock, the ambulance arrived and took the man to the hospital. The doctor said "Thank you! You two are great! You phoned the ambulance just in time."

Place: 1st place

Class: 5C

Name: Ng Wai Shun

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were chatting happily while they were on their way to school. As they walked along the road, they suddenly heard someone shouting," Ouch! It hurts, it hurts!" The noise came from the cycling trail that connects with the city's park. They turned their heads and gasped! There was a man lying next to a bicycle on the muddy road. He was bleeding badly, and he was trying to cover up some of his wounds when we Danny and I saw him. It looks like he broke his leg.

Danny remained silent and thought of an idea. He took off his jacket and put it over the man's shoulders. "You will be all right in no time! Just stay positive", said Danny. Daisy also helped the man, she sprinted through town square looking for a public phone she can use. After finding a phone, she quickly dialed '999'. Danny and Daisy worked well together.

Within a few minutes, they heard the sirens of an ambulance and a police car. Feeling touched and happy the man thanked Danny and I for being so helpful. "The town's people can be selfish at times, but both of you deserve fame and wealth" said the man softly. Danny and Daisy felt proud and waved the man goodbye. With the man now in safe hands, Danny and I made our way to school. Our teacher scolded us for being 5 minutes late, but we were not ashamed about what we did. But instead we continued spreading kindness and we are determine in helping others. We believe you will do the same.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 5C

Name: Raven Ian Peter

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school when they heard someone crying for help. It came from the cycle trail down below. "What was that?" asked Daisy. "Someone is crying for help! Look! Someone fell down!" Cried Danny. A person was lying on the cycle trail with a damaged bike right beside him. "He broke his leg! We have to help him!" said Danny quickly. They ran down to the injured person and see what they can do.

"Are you ok?" asked Daisy. "We will help you." "I …. I broke me leg…" stuttered the man. "Don't worry, we will call an ambulance" said Danny. He took off his jacket and put it over the man. "Daisy! Go and find a phone! I'll stay with here to calm him down. Be fast!" said Danny. She ran of and look for a phone she can use to call for an ambulance. Daisy found a phone booth not far from the trail and quickly dialed '999'. "Help! I man broke his leg on the cycle trail on Lockhart Road in Central! Please come quickly!" She hung up and ran back to Danny. Within minutes an ambulance came and took the man away.

After school, Danny and Daisy went to visit the man in hospital. As he arrived he had a surgery and now he feels so much better. "Thanks kids, for helping me and for calling an ambulance. And by they way, what are your names?" asked the man when they came. "I am Daisy, and I am Danny" they both replied. "Here is a box of sweets to repay you for your kindness" said the man as he gave the box to them. "Thank you, thank you, thank you! We love sweets!" cried Daisy and Danny. After that, they went home happily, and showing the box of sweets to their friends and sharing it evenly. "I hope the man will recover soon" said Daisy. "Me too" replied Danny.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 5C

Name: Yu Anson Pak Yan

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. They were chatting to each other about cars. Sports cars, Sedans and Super cars.

Suddenly, they heard a noise. It is someone crying for help. But the voice was weird, it was like a mix between a human and a robot. Daisy said, "The voice sounds a bit weird, but shall we find that person that needs help?" "Yes, it might be risky though, but I think it will be a great adventure!" replied Danny.

As soon as Danny replied, they started to walk towards the noise but in a crab like movement as it is risky situation. They walked passed the flowers, and trees and saw a bicycle trail right in front of them. It was not like your typical kind of trail, but this one was purple in colour. "This is probably the greatest mystery of the 21st century!" as Danny trying to make a joke. "It totally is" replied Daisy. They walked and walked, and they were tired and wanted to find a place to take a rest. At that moment, they saw the man who cried for help. He was wearing a yellow T-shirt, black shoes, and black shorts. "Hel… Hello, can you help me? I was trying to do stunts with my BMX bicycle, but I failed. I broke my leg and I can't feel the pain. I... I am so cold!" Danny quickly took off his jacket and put it over the man's shoulders. At the same time, Daisy dialed '999' for urgent help.

Within minutes, the ambulance arrived. The medics had a wheelchair and medical supplies. They load the man into the ambulance and was about to leave, the man thanked them kindly for helping him. "I bet you are wondering why the trail is purple? Well I spilled some paint earlier on" said Danny. This was a wonderful experience for both of us. We hope the man will recover soon, and this purple tragedy won't happen again.

Place: 1st place

Class: 5D

Name: Ng Him To

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. They met a weird clown who told them a funny joke, but they were in a hurry. They almost arrived at school, when they heard someone screaming for help! The sound came from a nearby cycle trail. They followed the trail and saw a man was bleeding. They rushed to the man and asked, "What happened?" He pointed to his bike and responded, "I was cycling on the trail when I fell down and broke my leg". Danny and Daisy saw the man's sad face and decided to help him.

Danny put down his bag and grabbed a few bandages. He wrapped it around the man's injured leg and told Daisy to dial 999. Daisy listened and realized she forgot to bring her mobile phone. She ran back to school, and saw a man standing at the end of the path, she asked him to dial '999' as I man down the road is in a lot of pain.

The ambulance arrived and took the man to the hospital. The doctor thanked us for our help, but we were late, and our teachers punished us, even though we did something great.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 5D

Name: Chan Hiu Lam Sophie

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. They are talking about comics. Suddenly, they heard a voice, "Help! Help!" Danny and Daisy rushed over to the man and asked him "What happened?" The man said, "I was riding on my bike, when I suddenly fell over. I think I broke my leg". Daisy don't know what to do now.

Danny is clever, he took of his jacket and put over the man and told Daisy to look for a phone and dial '999' as the man broke his phone. Daisy found a phone in the park a quickly dialed '999'. The ambulance arrived a few minutes later and took the man to hospital. The ambulance driver said, "Thank you for your help, Danny and Daisy." They both felt very proud.

At last, Daisy shout, "Oh no, we are late for school!" Danny ran quickly and told Daisy to run as fast as she can. When they arrived at school the teacher asked, "Why are you so late?" So, Danny replied "We helped a man who broke his leg." Their teacher was so surprised about the good deed her students had done. A week later, Danny and Daisy received a letter from the man, thanking them for helping him. Inside the letter was some candy too, they both were very happy.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 5D

Name: Yiu Rico

On a Monday morning, Daisy and Danny were on their way to school. Suddenly, they heard a loud noise crying for help. "Help me! Help me! Ahhh!" the man's voice shouted. They went to see what happened, as they walked onto the cycling trail, they saw an adult man lying on the ground. The man said, "My name is Renser, I saw a tiger! He wanted to eat me and then I fell of my bike and broke my leg. "Oh, are you okay Renser? Where is the tiger now?" Asked Danny. "It went that way" the man said and pointed to his right-hand side. "Daisy! Go and call the police. I will stay here and take care of him." Danny took of his jacket and gave it to Renser. Daisy found a phone and dialed '999'.

The police arrived and took the man to hospital. "Thank you for your help", said Renser. Danny and Daisy both replied, "You are welcome!"

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