Young Writer 2017-2018 P.3

Place: 1st place

Class: 3A

Name: Chan Shun Yuet

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. When, Tom woke up he thought that he was late for school. He said, "Oh my God! I am late! It is already half past seven!" He felt scared and thought about the punishment. Then, he brushed his teeth and quickly packed his schoolbag. He thought of getting to school as fast as he could.

Right before he left, his mum said, "Tom! Today is the 8th of May, it is Sunday. There is no school." He laughed at himself and thought about how stupid he was.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 3A

Name: Tam Yat Sham Milton

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Tom woke up at half past seven this morning. "Oh! I am late for school! Said Tom. He was scared and got up quickly. Then he brushed his teeth and changed into his school uniform. Tom packed his schoolbag.

He walked to the door, picked up his schoolbag and wanted to leave home. Suddenly Mum came out and said, "Tom! Stop! Today is the 8th of May. It is Sunday! Tom looked at his Mum and smiled. "I feel so embarrassed", he said softly.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 3A

Name: Chan Yip

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. When, he woke up at half past seven. He screamed "Oh no! I am late for school," He was scared. Then, Tom brushed his teeth in the bathroom and packed his schoolbag in his bedroom.

When he wanted to leave home, his Mum called, and asked "Tom, where are you going?" Tom answered, "I'm going to school!" Mum said, "You are so silly Tom. Today is Sunday, you don't need to go to school." Then, Tom thought, I am so silly that I don't even know what day it is today.

Place: 1st place

Class: 3B

Name: Choi Anissa

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Then, he woke up and said, "I'm late for school". He was really scared, so he jumped out of his bed as fast as he could.

Afterwards, he rushed into the bathroom to brush his teeth. Then, he went to the living room to pack his schoolbag. After that, he ran down stairs and was about to leave home, when Mum pointed at the calendar and said, "You don't have to go to school today Tom!" Tom looked at the calendar and noticed that today was Sunday. They both laughed happily together.

 

Place: 2nd place

Class: 3B

Name: Lee Hok Wang Nathan

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Suddenly his alarm clock rang loudly, and Tom woke up. When he looked at the clock he yelled, "I'm late!"

Then he rushed to the bathroom to brush his teeth and ran downstairs to pack his schoolbag. For a while he thought about how he was going to explain to his teacher the reason for being late, but there was no time to worry about it now.

All of a sudden, his mum came out and asked "Son, today is Sunday. Do you need to go to school for extracurricular activities?" Tom felt embarrassed because he forgot that today was Sunday.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 3B

Name: Tsai Tsz Yin Princess

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Suddenly, he woke up and said, "I'm late for school!" Then, he started to feel scared and worried about his teacher been mad at him because he was late for school.

Then he went to the bathroom and brushed his teeth. After that, he packed his schoolbag. Afterwards, he went downstairs, opened the door, and left the house. Then, mum came out and said, "Tom, today is a holiday. You don't have to go to school". Tom was relieved and happy!

Place: 1st place

Class: 3C

Name: Ho Cheuk Wun

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Suddenly, he was wakened up by a nightmare. Then, he looked at the clock and screamed "It is already 7:30 and I am late for school!" He was very scared at that time.

He quickly rushed to the bathroom and brushed his teeth. After that, he put on his school uniform and packed his schoolbag. When, he was about to leave home, his mother came out and asked, "Where are you going silly Tom? You don't need to go to school as today is Sunday," Tom looked at the calendar and felt very confused.

He asked, "Why am I so forgetful?" Finally, his mom comforted him to calm him down and let Tom have a quiet and peaceful Sunday.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 3C

Name: Yeung Hau Yu Eugene

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. When he heard his alarm ringing. He shouted "Oh no! I am late for school!" He rushed to the bathroom to brush his teeth. Then, he ran to the closet to get his schoolbag and quickly changed into his school uniform.

When, he was (all) ready for school, he rushed to the door. As he opened the door, his mum said, "Wait! Today is Sunday! You don't have to go to school!" Tom heard what his mum said. He felt so surprised.

He slowly walked back to his room. He took off his clothes and said, "Yes! Today I can play my favourite video games." When his mum heard what he said, she said "No, not today! Even though it is Sunday I will give you some work you'll have to do." Tom felt really disappointed.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 3C

Name: Jin Jia Li

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Suddenly, he woke up and looked at his clock. He said "Oh no! I'm late for school!" He was scared because he will not be on time for school. He rushed to the bathroom to brush his teeth and to pack his schoolbag very quickly. After that, he left home and ran to school.

When he arrived at school, he saw the big gate was closed and there were no children inside the school yard. "Why is the school gate closed and why can't I see any of my classmates walking around? This is so weird" said Tom to himself.

Then, he took a walk back home. As he arrived, he asked his mum "Did I have to go to school today?" "Certainly not! Today is Sunday! Didn't you know that?" Tom was shocked. He didn't know that today was Sunday!

Place: 1st place

Class: 3D

Name: Kong Liam

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Then, he woke up and he realized it was already half past seven. "I"m late!" he shouted. Will I get shouted at by Miss Tong and Mr. Wong he thought for a second? Miss Tong is the school"s strictest teacher and Mr. Wong is the school"s head teacher.

In a flash he was in the washroom, brushing his teeth and after that, he was packing his school bag and within fifteen minutes he was by the door. When, he was about to turn the door knob, he suddenly thought. Today is my assessment and I haven"t even studied, because last night I was too busy playing Xbox two and didn"t study at all.

But then mum came out and said "Honey, why are you going so early in the morning? Do you have some important events?" But then Tom thinks, 'Oh, yes today is Sunday!" and he was very relieved. Do you think Tom is silly? Well, in my opinion? The answer is yes!


Place: 2nd place

Class: 3D

Name: Lee Kai Ho Kyle

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. Then, he realized it"s time for school. He jumped out of the bed. He was very scared because he was late for school. Then, he brushed his teeth and packed his school bag very quickly.

He didn"t eat his breakfast, and rushed to the door, he opened it quickly and was about to leave. Mum heard a loud noise and went to the door. She saw Tom is in his school uniform and is on his way to school. So, she said "Tom, it is Sunday, you don"t need to go to school."

Then, Tom realized "Oh, yes! It is, how could I forget?" At last, he went back to bed and slept very well. But, it was all a dream. What a funny story "ha ha".


Place: 3rd place

Class: 3D

Name: Kan Pui Him Cayden

Tom was sleeping in his bedroom. He woke up and saw that the alarm said, that it was already half past seven. So, he was so scared.

He used his fastest way to brush his teeth and to pack his school bag because he can"t be late for school. That makes Tom"s dad very angry. When, he was about to leave he felt very scared. Until he saw his mum and she said "Tom, today is Sunday there is no school.” Tom was so relieved and thought 'How silly can I be?"

The story teaches us don"t be scared when you think you are wrong, because you need to check the real thing then think whether you are right or wrong.

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