Young Writer 2017-2018 P.1

Place: 1st place

Class: 1A

Name: Wong Chung Chi Midas

There are five dinosaurs.

They have sharp teeth. One dinosaur is in the sky.

Some dinosaurs are on the grass. Some dinosaurs are in the sea.

My favourite dinosaur is a T-Rex. It says "ROAR!"

It is strong.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 1A

Name: Cheng Caitlin Jane

This is a unicorn. It has pink wings.

It has a purple horn. It has a blue and pink skin too.

It has a red tail. It has a green mane.

I like it because it is pretty, but I don't know if it is true.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 1A

Name: Chan Hazel Hei Shuen

There are two pandas. They have short legs.

They have small mouths. They have big ears.

They eat bamboo leaves. They are on the grass.

They are fat. They are lovely.

There are lovely flowers too.

I like them because they are cute.

Place: 1st place

Class: 1B

Name: Li Chi Yin Anson

This is my dream pet. It is a cat. It has a long brushy tail! It likes to smile, jump, and go all over our home. Everyone that visits our house cuddles him. Its name is 'Fluffy' because it is very fluffy. Let me tell you a story. One day a lot of people came to our house. They thought Fluffy was a dog! In the end, I told them it was a cat. Fluffy has long ears. When, you remove everything from its body it looks like a seashell. It likes jumping over the mat. I like Fluffy, because she is kind, playful and friendly.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 1B

Name: Tse Terry

This is a donkey, and his name is 'Trump'. It has a bag and a seat. It also has a nose, a long tail, some fur, and an American flag. It is sixty-seven years old. Its legs are short, and its two eyes are big. It also has a heavy head. It likes eating apples. It likes to smile, and it is very strong. With one kick it can break a stone. It was in a show, and the judges gave it five stars. It got first place. Donald was very happy. I like it because it is clever and smart.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 1B

Name: Chan Pak Hei

This is my lion. It is big and thin. It has a big head.

It also has a big mouth, four short legs, and a short tail.

It is yellow and fat. It is a nice lion. It is 9 years old and its name is 'Oscar'.

Place: 1st place

Class: 1C

Name: Yip Bok Heem

Today is a sunny day.

The lion is hunting.

What? The lion! Oh, the lion is cute.

Then, the tiger is hunting too.  The tiger is lovely.

No, I don’t like the tiger. I like the lion more.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 1C

Name: Chan Wing Man

This is a rabbit.

It has long ears. It has a short tail too.

It has big eyes. It is fat.

It likes to eat carrots.

There are flowers near the rabbit.

It is lovely.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 1C

Name: Yip Sze Yin

There are three cats. They are on the grass.

They are brown, black, and white.

They have long tails. They have short legs.

They can run and jump.

They are cute and small.

Place: 1st place

Class: 1D

Name: Chan Ka Ming Alistair

There are two cats. One is yellow and brown and the other one is orange and red.

The yellow and brown cat's name is Anlee, and the orange and red cat's name is Lela.

One is on the grass and one is on the bench.

I like Anlee she is cute, but I don't like Lela she is not cute.


Place: 2nd place

Class: 1D

Name: Yip Shek Hin Isaac

There is a lion.

It is on the grass.

It has long legs, it also has a long tail.

It has yellow and orange fur.

It likes to eat meat. It has sharp teeth.

I like it because it is strong.


Place: 3rd place

Class: 1D

Name: Cheuk Kwan Yin

There are six penguins.

They are on the ice.

They are black, grey and yellow.

They like to eat fish. They have small mouths.

They have big eyes.

They are small.

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