Young Writer 2016-2017 P.5

Place: 1st place

Class: 5A

Name: Wong Pak Hei

It was late at night and Jack the crazy school boy stayed up late to revise his work because he will have an examination tomorrow so, he studied very hard. After an hour or so, he finally went to bed. The next morning after Jack had finished his breakfast, he got changed into his school uniform, picked up his bag, waved goodbye to his mother and left for school.

When Jack was riding in the lift, it suddenly stopped and it went all dark. The lift was 'out of order'! Jack was so scared he was running and moving around in the lift trying to find a way out but he couldn't see a thing in the darkness, so he accidently banged his head on the wall and fell. He twisted his right ankle and scraped his elbow! Ouch! He shouted and he started to cry. 'Mama! Mama! Help! Can anybody help me? I am going to die'!

Suddenly there was an answer within the lift 'Picachuuuuuuuuuuuuu!' 'Ping'! and the lift was moving again. Jack was so delighted, that he shouted happily 'Thank you lift'. And then out of nowhere a Pica Chu appeared right in front of Jack. 'Oh sorry' Jack said. 'Thank you, Pica Chu for helping me'. Pica Chu nodded happily and then he disappeared. 

Place: 2nd place

Class: 5A

Name: Hui Tsz Kwai

It was nearly midnight but Jack was staying up late because he had to study for his exam tomorrow. He studied very hard. His mum came by and said 'Sonny, it's nearly 11:30. I think you should go to bed now'. So, Jack closed his book, turned off his light and climbed into bed.

The next morning, Jack studied a bit more. Then, he put on his uniform and went to school. When he stepped inside the lift, it felt more luxurious than ever before. Hmmmm! He thought to himself. I am sure they must have decorated it. He pressed the button for the 'ground floor' but something felt weird. Suddenly, the lights went off and the lift came to a hold. He was frightened. Jack shouted 'Help! Help! Can somebody help me!' The things around him started wiggling and twisting. Then, the lights came back on. He opened the door and … everything felt normal.

Jack felt much better. He got onto his school bus and went to school. Everything was as usual and Jack continued living his boring life again. Wait a minute he thought! Is that a cow wearing a hat and a pig eating some biscuits and a naked man sleeping peacefully on the park bench? This day is out of the ordinary…  

Place: 3rd place

Class: 5A

Name: Wu Ga Yu Hannah

Jack has an exam today, so he stayed up late last night to study. The next morning Jack waved goodbye to his mum and went to school. He walked into the lift and press the button for the 'ground floor' without noticing the letter saying the lift is 'out of order'. Jack was singing when the lift got stuck and it went all dark inside. He didn't know what to do! He cried for helped but nobody answered or came to his rescue.

He was so scared and kept on thinking about his exams. Luckily, a woman was walking by when she heard his cries. She called the Fire Brigade to come and rescue Jack. He was late for school and he missed his exams. His teacher said, 'Late again?'. Jack told his teacher about the incident and why he arrived late for school. He replied by saying 'I am sorry to hear that Jack. Please be careful when you out by yourself, and try to be on time'. You will have your exam now, and he took Jack away to the exam hall. 

Place: 1st place

Class: 5B

Name: Paz Anna Michaela Tiu

A boy called Jack grew up into a hard-working family. When there was an exam, he will stay up late to study. He didn't care if he was sleepy, all he cared about was getting good grades. One day before his exam, he stayed up late to study. He didn't eat anything neither took a shower. All he did was studying so he was exhausted and very smelly. In the morning he woke up, ate his breakfast, and took and shower. He was feeling good, he thought to himself "I stayed up all night to study, I'm for sure going to get good grades this time". He said goodbye to his mum and left for school feeling confident.

When Jack was in the lift, it suddenly went out of order. It was so dark that he couldn't see anything. He was so scared and anxious, that he thought to myself 'Today I am going to die in here. Mum, I love you. If I don't get out of here, just know that I have always loved you. Don't ever forget me. I will watch over you from heaven'. Then he remembered that all he must do is to press the emergency button. He pressed the button and waited patiently for someone to rescue him. Suddenly, he heard someone talking. It was the security guard, he saved me immediately. Jack said, "Thank you so much" and the security guard said, "You are very welcome". He hugged him whole heartedly.

He thought it was too late for him to go to school to write his exam. So, he returned home feeling very disappointed. His mum told him the school had phoned and that he can take his exam later, because they felt bad at what had happened. Jack was so, exited and he took his exam the next day. 

Place: 2nd place

Class: 5B

Name: Sung Yuen Yiu

After dinner, Jack took some of his books to study for his exam. He stayed up late and studied for four hours, because last year he failed. He doesn't want to fail again this year so, he studied much harder.  

Exam day has arrived. Jack woke up at 5:00 a.m. He had his breakfast and studied for one more hour before he went to school. He waved goodbye to his mum and left. When he was in the lift making his way to the ground floor, it suddenly came to a stop. It was dark and he couldn't see a thing. He was scared, so he cried for 'Help!' Two firemen tried to open the door to help Jack get out. He came out safely and without saying a word he ran to school as fast could. He nearly missed his exam. What a scary day, he thought. 

Place: 3rd place

Class: 5B

Name: Lam Choi Ling

An accident happened this morning before Jack had his exam. The night before Jack stayed up late to study for his exam. The next morning Jack woke up and got ready for school. He waved goodbye to his mum and left in a hurry. As he was riding in the lift it went out of order. It was dark and very scary. He was panicking and couldn't find a way out of the lift. But then, he noticed the alarm button and he pressed it. 

A few minutes later a few firemen arrived and got him out safely. Jack 'thanked' the firemen. He got in a taxi and went to school. As he arrived he realized that his classmates are already busy writing their exams. He told his teacher why he was late. The teacher understood what had happened and let Jack writes his exam. After school, Jack went home and told his mom about his day. He was so happy for remembering to press the button. 

Place: 1st place

Class: 5C

Name: Ng Sum Yu

Jack will have an exam tomorrow, so he stayed up late to study. He stayed up until one o'clock the next morning. Then he went to sleep. Jack studied for about six hours and he knew he was ready for the exams the next day.

The next morning, Jack woke up at six he felt ready for the day that lies ahead. He had his breakfast at six fifteen after that he got ready and waved goodbye to his mum and went to school. Jack walked into the lift and it suddenly came to a stop. It was really dark inside, that frightened Jack. He didn't know what to do, and he tried his best to find someone to help him. However, there was nobody near the lift. Jack cried softly, 'Oh, what can I do? I will have my exam later at school!' He looked at his watch. There was some light coming from the buttons. 'Oh, no! I am going to be late. It's half past six now! I must be at school at seven o'clock', he said sadly and anxiously.

Jack was crying when he spotted the yellow emergency button on the wall and he pressed it. He remembered that this button was for calling for help when someone was stuck. He was shouting through the microphone begging for help. The lift is out of order! I'm stuck and I have to get to school. 'Please help!' Jack shouted loudly. Ten minutes later, a few firemen came and saved him. "Are you alright" a fireman asked? 'I am ok… but wait! I have to go to school!' Jack said and he ran off. 

Place: 2nd place

Class: 5C

Name: Choi Kui Wang

Jack was studying for his exam, so he stayed up late. He felt tired but he must get good marks because his mum wanted him to do so. He finished studying at one o'clock and went to bed.

In the morning, he finished his yummy breakfast and waved goodbye to his mum and of he went to school. Before he left his mum said nervously, "Be careful Jack and good luck". "Okay mum," Jack answered happily. When he was in the lift, it suddenly went out of order and it was very dark. Jack was scared! He knew he must press the red button to call 999.

Luckily, the police came within minutes and they saved Jack. Although he was saved, he was still late for school. But he was proud of himself for remembering to press the emergency button. After Jack went to school, he quickly finished his exam and got a high score. His mum was very happy and so proud of him. 

Place: 3rd place

Class: 5C

Name: Mang Wing Lam

It was Jack's exam, so he studied very hard last night. He stayed up very late and studied for three hours. His mother asked him to go to bed, but he continued to study.

The next morning, he woke up late. He ate his breakfast and went to school. He waved goodbye to his mum and left. As he was in the lift it suddenly came to a stop. He was frightened, and pressed the help button immediately. The lift inside was very dark and Jack began to cry. He was crying and said, 'Help! I am in here! Please help me to get out!'

A few minutes later, the firemen can to Jack's rescue. They opened the lift door and pulled Jack to safety. The owner of the building apologized for the incident. He said, 'Sorry, I promise this won't happen again'. Jack went to school but the exams already started. He was late and the teacher asked him what happened. Jack explained why he was late and therefor the teacher didn't punish him. Although Jack was late for school, he could sit his exam. Jack thought the teacher was nice.

Place: 1st place

Class: 5D

Name: Winston Wong

Tomorrow was the final exam. Jack forgot to study so he stayed up late to prepare for his exam. The next day, Jack knew he was ready. He ate some bread and an energy bar. He waved goodbye to his sister and his mum and left for school.

He was walking towards the lift when he heard a sound. He looked around and then he pressed the 'down' button. He went in to the lift and went down to the ground floor. Suddenly, the lift came to as stop. It was out of order, Jack said to himself. 'If I was trapped in the dark, how can I get to school?' Jack realized there was no way out. But suddenly, he thought of an idea.

He took out his phone and tried to phone his mom, but there was no reception. He turned on his flashlight and shined around the lift but couldn't find anything. He jumped up and down and the lift started moving slowly towards the ground. He jumped some more and suddenly the lift was working again. Jack ran to school and made it just in time for his exam.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 5D

Name: Lai Yin Ni Jahnaya

Once upon a time there was a hard-working boy called Jack. He always stayed up late at night and studied for his up and coming exams.

One day, Jack woke early and went to his mum's bedroom. "Good morning Mum!" Jack said politely. "Good morning my son. Let's have some breakfast!" she said. After breakfast, Jack packed his schoolbag and got ready for school. "Goodbye Mum!" Jack said happily. He waved goodbye and made his way to school.

He pressed the lift button, the doors opened, he went inside and the doors closed behind him. Suddenly, the lights went out. It was pitch black inside. There was a notice on the side of the wall saying, "Out of order". Jack was really scared. "Help! Mum! Save me!" he cried out loudly.

A lady was passing by the broken lift, and heard Jack's cries. She called the Fire Services and they came to Jack's rescue. Jack thanked the lady. "You saved my life!" he said. Oh no! I am late for school and he ran as fast as he could. 

Place: 3rd place

Class: 5D

Name: Soon Tsit Ning Jaclyn

Yesterday, Jack stayed up late to study for his exam." It is 11 o'clock now" his mom said. I think it is time for you to go to bed, you have an exam tomorrow. Sleep early and you will have a lot more energy. 'Within minutes' Jack went to sleep.

In the morning, Jack woke up early and studied a bit more. 15 minutes later he grabbed his bag, waved goodbye to his mom and went to school. Jack walked to the lift, pressed the button, and went inside. Suddenly, the lights went out and it was very dark. "Arghhhhh!" screamed Jack loudly. It was dark and he was very frightened. He started to cry and set of the alarm. Within minutes, Jack saw a man with a light in front of him. "Are you ok?" asked the man wearing a black T-shirt. "Thank you! I am okay!" said Jack.

Jack ran to school. When he arrived, he noticed he was too late and the exam was already over. Jack cried loudly…

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