Young Writer 2016-2017 P.2

Place: 1st place

Class: 2A

Name: Chan Yip

Today is Sunday and Tom and Peter are going hiking on the hill to Sai Kung Country Park.

Tom and Peter first fly their kites. Then they have a picnic sitting on the mat. They have sandwiches and juice. The food tastes good. They really enjoy the food.

It's time to go home. They go down the hill to find their home but they cannot find their home. They are very worried but they find some footprints. They follow the footprints and they find their home! The end.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 2A

Name: Yau Chin Ying

On Sunday, Peter and his friend go to Sai Kung Country Park. They go to the hill and fly kites. They finish flying their kites and have a picnic. They sit on the mat and eat their yummy sandwiches. Then they finish their food and want to go back home but they cannot find the way to go home. They see a police officer and they ask "Where is Wan Chai?" The Police officer says "Turn right." They say "Thank you." and they go home.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 2A

Name: Wu Mun Yu, Clara

Today, Kenny and Shara go to Sai Kung Country Park. They are very happy and they run on the hill and fly kites.

At one o'clock, they sit on a mat and have a picnic. They have sandwiches and juice.

At three o'clock, they want to go home, but they cannot find their home. They are very worried, but luckily Kenny's mom is on the hill. Now they are not worried, and they are very happy.

Place: 1st place

Class: 2B

Name: Joanna Ng

Sunday, Peter and his friend, Tom, were going to Sai Kung Country Park, When they arrived, they took out their kites and flew them. Then they were hungry, so they had a picnic. They took out the mat from Tom's backpack. Then they put their backpack on the mat. The took the food and enjoyed the food. They had sandwiches and juice for the picnic. When it was dard they wanted to go home but they were lost! They could not find the way back home. Tom was so worried he wanted to cry! Then Peter's dad ran to them and shouted "Why didn't you naughty boys tell me before going out of the house. I ran miles from the house!" Then Peter said "Sorry Dad, I won't do it again."

Place: 2nd place

Class: 2B

Name: Foo Ka Hei, Darius

On Sunday, Peter and his friend, Tom, went to Sai Kung Country Park to fly kites on the hill. After playing with the kites, they had a picnic. Peter and Tom sat on the mat and enjoyed food like sandwiches and juice. When it was time to go home, they could not find their home. They became worried. Suddenly, Tom remembered their home was on the north side of the world. Tom asked if Peter had a compass. He said he did, so they used the compass to return home.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 2B

Name: Anissa Choi

Today Petera and Tom go to Sai Kung Country Park. They fly their kites on the hill. Then they sit on a mat and have a picnic. They have cheese sandwiches and apple juice. When it gets dark, they want to go home but they are worried because they can't find their home! Then, thankfully Tom has a torch. Then it gets bright! They can see, so they go back home. They tell Mum and Dad what they did that day.

Place: 1st place

Class: 2C

Name: Yeung Hau Yu, Eugene

Tom, and his friend Peter went to Sai Kung Country Park together. They all flew kites on top of the hill. It was really fun and exciting! Next, they were all having a picnic together. They sat on the mat and enjoyed the food. There were three sandwiches for each of us and many kinds of juice for us to drink. It was so fun! At last, it was night time. We all needed to go home but could not find the right way home. We were so scared and worried! We found a man on the way. We talked to him and he helped us find the way home! We were all so glad that we found him and we said thank you to him. We were all so happy and thankful.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 2C

Name: Ho Cheuk Wun, Debbie

Today is sunny and warm. I go to Sai Kung Country Park with my friend Tom. We go on the hill and fly kites. We are happy.

Then, we have a picnic on the grass. We sit on the mat and enjoy the food. We have sandwiches and some juice. We are very happy.

Next, we go home. We cannot find our way home. I ask Tom "Can you help me find my home, I cannot find my home." but Tom says "I also cannot find home." We are worried.

Tom thinks. Then he has a good idea. He says "Let me call my mum." He opens the bag and wants to get his phone, but he says "I forgot to bring my phone." I say "I brought a phone." I call Mum, "I cannot find the way, can you help me?" Mum says "I will go to the park and bring you home." Then Mum comes to the park and brings us home.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 2B

Name: Chan Hiu Tung, Katie

Today, Tom and Jane go to Sai Kung Country Park to fly kites on the hill. Jane feels hungry. They have a picnic. They sit on a mat. They are enjoying the food. There are sandwiches and juice.

They want to go home but they cannot find their home. They are worried. A man comes. He asks "Why are you sad?" Tom says "We cannot find our home." The man asks "Where is your home?" Jane says "Our home is next to the church." The man brings them home. Tom says "Thank you." Jane gives him some cookies. The man says "Thank you, bye." Then the man goes home.

Place: 1st place

Class: 2D

Name: Lee Kai Ho, Kyle

One day, Ethan and Mary go to the Sai Kung Country Park to fly kites on a hill. They are a little bit tired, so they have a picnic and they bring lots of yummy foods. They eat yummy sandwiches and some juice. They want to get back home so they start to walk, but they can't find their home. They are still walking when they see an old lady wearing a brown dress. They ask, "Who are you?" but it was a witch and they say "Ahhhhh, help!" But in the end it was just a dream.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 2D

Name: Amber Jade Fuentes Santiago

In Sai Kung Country Park, Peter and Tom are having fun. They are flying their kites. Then, Tom and Peter have a picnic at Sai Kung Country Park. They have sandwiches and juice. After that, they get lost in the forest! And they cannot find their way home in the forest! They really feel worried. Then, all the animals help Tom and Peter! Tom and Peter are very happy now! The end.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 2D

Name: Cheung Yeung

Today, my brother and I go to Sai Kung Country Park. We fly the kites on the hill. In the afternoon we have a picnic. We sit on the mat. We enjoy the food. We have sandwiches and drink some apple juice. When we go home we cannot find our home. We are worried. A nice man sees we are worried. He asks why we are worried. We tell him and he tells me where our home is. We say "Thank you." to him.

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