Young Writer 2015-2016 P.4

Place: 1st place

Class: 4A

Name: Foo Cheuk Hei, Julius 胡倬浠

  Once upon a time, there was a boy named Danny. He was an unhealthy child. He loved to eat a lot of meat and sugary food. He only did sports once a month.

  One time, he woke up and in the window he saw a candy house! He was so excited that he crawled out of the window and ran to the candy house. Inside, he saw an old woman. The old woman invited him into her house to eat all of the sweets. As Danny ate and ate, he also became fatter and fatter.

  Then, the old woman tied Danny up with a rope and carried him into the kitchen and put him in a big pot of stew. “You, big fat child, are going to make me the best stew in the world!” “AAAHHHHH!” cried Danny. Then suddenly, a boy covered in strong armor said “Let him go!”

  “Never!” replied the old woman and turned the boy into chocolate. Then, Danny realized the ropes were made of chocolate! Danny didn’t waste a second and chewed through the chocolate ropes. He chewed and chewed and finally, he chewed all the way through the ropes.

  As soon as that happened, Danny woke up. Then he realized all of that had only been a dream. He was so relieved that he jumped up and down.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 4A

Name: Choi Hei Wai, Melody 蔡曦慧

  Once upon a time there was a boy called Danny. He was an unhealthy boy. He liked eating meat and sugary food. He didn’t like doing sports because he would get tired easily so he would only do sports once per month.

  One day when he woke up, a wizardess invited Danny to her candy house. Danny was very happy and thanked the wizardess.

  When he came in, there were a lot of candies and he was surprised. Every day he ate and ate and got fatter. While he was eating happily, the wizardess tied Danny up suddenly.  Danny shouted loudly, “Help! Help!”

  At that time, a magician heard that and went to the candy house. He said, “Magic, magic, become thinner.” Then, Danny became thinner, got out of the ropes and he escaped.

  Danny was thankful and he thanked the magician. The magician said, “You are welcome. You should have good habits.” Danny became healthy after this affair. One month later, the magician met Danny in the sports centre…

Place: 3rd place

Class: 4A

Name: Hui Tsz Kwai 許子逵

  Danny was a fat boy. He only ate sweets and meat. He only did sports once per month. His parents told him to eat more healthy food but Danny never listened. One day, a dream just taught him that.

  One day, Danny woke up and saw a candy house outside the window. Because the house looked so yummy, Danny decided to go there.

  When he got there, an old woman came out of the house. She said, “Little boy, do you want to come in and eat candy?” Danny, of course, said “Yes!”

  When Danny went in, he saw so many treats it was like heaven! Danny gobbled up all of the treats and the old woman gave him more. Danny ate so much that he became very fat.

  Suddenly, it became pitch black. When Danny woke up, he saw the old woman putting him into a pot. He was tied up so he could not move. The old woman cackled, “Ha ha ha, now I can eat you!” Danny screamed “Help!” but it did not work. Suddenly, the old woman screamed, “Heart attack, heart attack!”, and she fell to the ground.

  Danny woke up with a start. It was just a dream! But Danny knew what he should eat for breakfast: a cheese sandwich, please!

Place: 1st place

Class: 4B

Name: Paz Anna Michaela Tiu

  Once upon a time there was a little boy named Danny. He was very unhealthy. He ate a lot of meat and a lot of sugary food. He also did not do a lot of sports. He would only play sports once a month.

  One day, when he woke up he looked out the window and he saw an old lady standing in front of a candy house. He saw sweets on the table and immediately went in and sat on the chair. He ate sweets all day, until the sweets on the table were all gone. So, he asked the old lady for some more. She saw how fat Danny was. Then she began her plan. The plan was to tie him up, put him into a cauldron and eat him up. This “old lady” was actually a witch. Oh no!

  Danny wanted to escape so badly that he regretted that he had come into the candy house at all. Suddenly, the witch’s good sister appeared. She came to help Danny escape! She had known her evil sister would do something bad like this. She cast a spell so that her evil sister would go back to where she came from. Danny thanked the good sister and she disappeared.

  Danny woke up and said to himself “Thank gosh. It’s just a dream!” Little did he know that right outside the window there was an old lady hanging out with her sister in front of a candy house. Dun dun dun (dramatic music) ...

Place: 2nd place

Class: 4B

Name: Tam Lok Ching 譚樂晴

  Once upon a time, there lived a boy called Danny. He was not a healthy boy because he always ate a lot of meat and sugary food and only did sports once a month.

  One day, Danny woke up and saw an old lady who invited him into a candy house. Danny was very happy that he could eat a lot of candy.

  Danny went to the candy house. He saw a lot of candy on the table. Danny ate a lot of candy. Then he got fatter and fatter and fatter. He was tired, so he went to the bed and slept.

  The old lady tied up the sleeping boy. Danny escaped, but he did not run away. Danny shouted and said “Help! Help!” No one could hear him when he shouted for help.

  Suddenly, a fairy appeared. She turned the old lady into a frog and killed her. Danny thanked the fairy and they became best friends. They were happy and went back to Danny’s home to play. They lived happily ever after.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 4B

Name: Lam Choi Ling, Alice 林彩鈴

  Once upon a time there lived a boy called Danny. He was an unhealthy boy. He only ate meat and sugary food.  He also did sports only once a month.

  One day, an old woman called Danny when he woke up. The old woman wanted to invite Danny to her candy house to eat unhealthy food. He said “Sure! I will go there now!” He went to the house and ate lots of junk food. He got fatter and fatter. Then, he fell asleep. The old woman tied him up and wanted to cook him because the old woman had been a witch the whole time! He woke up and said “Help! Help!” No one heard him. The old woman laughed evilly. He tried to escape and woke up from his dream.

  He said “Oh that was just a terrifying dream… oh well!” His mother said “Sweetie! Wanna have some candy?” He answered “Uh… no thanks, Mom!” After that he learned that he needed to be healthy.

Place: 1st place

Class: 4C

Name: Chiu Pak Hei, Heily 趙栢希

  Once upon a time, there was a naughty boy called Danny. He only ate meat and sugary food every day. He only did sports once a month and he only brushed his teeth once a day, so no one like him.

  One day when he woke up, he saw an old woman outside. The woman said, “Come here, my dear. I invite you to my house. I will give you lots of candy to and it’s all free. So do you want to come here now?”

  Danny changed his clothes, put on his shoes and ran like the Flash to the candy house. He ate candy, chocolate, ice cream and cakes. It was like a dream for Danny.

  One month later, Danny’s tummy became fat like a “ball”. When he woke up, he saw himself tied up and held by the old woman. The old woman was a wicked and menacing witch. Danny kept crying “Help! Help! Please, someone help me!” So, he woke up.

  When he woke up, he said “That was just a dream.” He saw a model of a candy house and an old and ugly woman. He thought that was weird.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 4C

Name: Yu Lok Tung, Audrey 楊樂童

  Once upon a time, there was a boy called Danny. He was an unhealthy boy. He ate meat and sugary food every day. He just did sports once a month.

  One day, Danny woke up and saw a woman outside the window. The woman shouted, “Danny, I want to invite you to go to my candy house. You can eat a lot of candy there.” Danny thought,  “Wow! I can eat a lot of candy! Yummy!” Danny ran to the candy house.

  When he went to that candy house he saw a lot of chocolates, candies and cakes. He loved it a lot! He ate as many candies, chocolates and cakes as he could.

  But suddenly, the woman tied him up. That woman was a wicked witch. She wanted to make Danny fatter and eat him. Danny wanted to escape and he shouted “Help! Help!”, but nobody helped him.

  Suddenly a good fairy appeared and killed the wicked witch. Danny said, “Thank you, fairy!” Danny went back home and the candy house disappeared and there was no more wicked witch there.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 4C

Name: Chung Yuen Mei, Mei Mei 鍾宛薇

  Once upon a time, there was a boy called Danny. He always ate a lot of meat and sugary food. Danny thought he was unhealthy and fat. He said, “I think I need to do more sports and eat more healthy food!” One month later, Danny looked thin. He had done a lot of sports that day so he felt tired and he fell asleep.

  The next day, Danny woke up. He saw an old woman outside the windows. There was a candy house behind the old woman. Danny felt hungry and he wanted to eat all of the candies.

  Danny followed the old woman and then they walked into the candy house. He saw lots of sugary food on the table. Danny ate all the food. He was getting fatter and fatter.

  Suddenly, the old woman used a rope to tie up Danny. She said, “I’m gonna make you fatter!” Danny felt scared. He said, “Help! Help!” A healthy prince took out a sword and fought the old woman. Finally she was gone. Danny said, “Thank you for helping me, but where did you come from?” The healthy prince said, “You’re not healthy. Don’t eat sugary food again. Eat more healthy food! It is good for you.”

  “Wake up!” Mum said. “It was a dream.” Danny said.

Place: 1st place

Class: 4D

Name: Wong, Winston 黃浩霆

  Once there lived a boy called Danny the Wizard who ate a lot of meat and sugary food and did sports once a month. These were very bad habits. He did all of this until a fairy came and said “Eating too much sugary food and meat will make you fat. You ought to eat more fruit and vegetables. You ought to do sports three times a day.”

  Danny followed the fairy’s advice and became thin. One day, he woke up and saw a house made of candy and in front was a witch and she said “Hi Danny! Do you want to come to my house and play?” Danny thought that the witch was very polite and friendly, but he was unaware that this witch was a wicked witch!

  Danny went to the witch’s house and smiled. The witch thought “This boy is very nice for my plan! Ha ha ha ha!” Danny went into the house and saw sweets, lollipops, chocolate and more! Danny forgot the fairy’s words and ate everything! But now Danny was so fat he couldn’t even move!

  The witch made her move and tied Danny up. Danny asked, “What are you doing?” The witch said, “Making my plans.” The witch dragged Danny next to a pot full of acid!

  Danny grabbed his wand and said “John Cena!” and he became thin again and got out of the ropes. And as for the witch, she turned into a frog.

Place: 2nd place

Class: 4D

Name: Lai Yin Ni, Jahnaya 黎彥妮

  Danny is a sporty boy. He goes jogging once a month, but he always eats meat and sugary food.

  One day, when he woke up, he looked out the window. He saw a giant candy house. He ran out of the house. Danny saw a woman standing at the front of the candy house. The woman invited Danny to come inside.

  Danny went to the candy house every night. He slept late at night because he waited for his parents to go to sleep so he could go to the candy house.

  Every night, Danny ate chocolates, sweets, and drank ten cans of soda and cola. Danny was getting fatter and fatter. His parents were worried about him.

  At night, Danny went back to the candy house and the woman gave him loads of sweets.  The woman said, “Danny, can you go into the kitchen? I’m cooking some food.” Danny went into the room.

  Then, the woman asked Danny to come closer. The woman tied Danny up. Danny called for help but no one answered. Danny gently pushed the woman into the boiling water. The woman died.

  Danny ran home. He became healthy again.

Place: 3rd place

Class: 4D

Name: Yeung Kit Shing, Leo 楊傑誠

  Danny ate a lot of meat and sugary food, but he only did sports once a month.  One day, when Danny woke up, he was in a candy house. Danny was so happy. He went around the candy house and he ate a lot of candy. Danny was getting fatter.

  Danny saw a bad witch. He tried to run but he was too fat, so he couldn’t run fast. The bad witch tied Danny up and the bad witch wanted to eat Danny.

  Finally, a good witch came out. The good witch used a sword to kill the bad witch. The good witch used some magic to save Danny. Danny said “Thank you.” to the good witch and he ran out of the candy house. Danny never ate candy again and did more sports.

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