Young Writer 2015-2016 P.3

Place:  Winner of the 2016 Writing Competition

Class: 3A

Name: Choy Hiu Chi Charis

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! He was in the toy shop, buying some toys for the children. He bought so many toys, his sack looked like it was about to explode.

  As the sun shone brightly he started to sweat. He was tired so he didn’t look where he was going. “Crash!”. He tripped on a stone and all the toys fell out! I ran over to help him to his feet. Santa was saying to himself “Oh no, what should I do now?”. Santa didn’t see me until I started packing his toys back in the sack. He smiled and said “Kind boy, I want to thank you for your kindness. “

  He took out the red toy car he bought in the shop and gave it to me. I was so happy. Before I could thank him, he disappeared in the blink of an eye. Before he left I could see him waving goodbye. I was so lucky to see Santa!

Place: First Runner Up

Class: 3A

Name: Yang Yat Meadow

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! First he went to a toy shop to buy some toys for the children. He bought two hundred toys from the shop! The cashier helped Santa Claus to put the toys he bought into the big bag. Poor old Santa carried the heavy presents to each children’s house.  Suddenly he fell down on the floor as he tripped over a tiny rock. He saw me. He was so surprised because he thought all the children were fast asleep already. Then I helped him to carry the bag. After wards he gave me a big teddy bear! That was what I wanted for Christmas this year.

  Santa told me not to tell my parents, as it is a secret between Santa and I. 

Place:  Second Runner Up

Class: 3A

Name: Chow Pui Lok Paul

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! I saw him buying lots of toys from Toy’s Rus. I followed him to the park and I saw Santa tripped on a stone and he fell down on the ground. I ran to him and saw his legs were broken! I took him to the hospital. Santa was thankful for the help and care I gave him and he said “Thank you!” to me.

  In the evening Mum said I need to go home. I was so excited because I want to tell Mum what I have done today. 

Place: Winner of the 2016 Writing Competition

Class: 3B

Name: Wan Hei Yiu Hailey

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! Santa and his elves were in the Fun Fun Toys Shop. They bought lots of toys like toy cars, dolls, balls, puzzles and teddy bears.

  He got all the presents and put them nicely into his magical bag. But the elves didn’t wait for Santa to go on the reindeer ride. So, Santa had to carry all the presents and walk all by himself back to the North pole. How sad.

  But Santa tripped on a stone and the presents went flying all around the world. Luckily all the presents went to the children who had wished for them and Santa went home safely.

Place: First Runner Up

Class: 3B

Name: Wong Chin Pui, Belinda

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! I saw him going to a toy shop. He bought many toys like toy cars, dolls, toy trains, balls and monkeys. He had a very big bag and Santa puts all the toys inside and carried it. Then he walked and walked but he tripped on a stone and fell down.

  I went out to help Santa pick up the toys and presents and put it into his bag. Santa Claus said “I was a good girl” and he gave me a toy monkey. I was so happy to help Santa Claus.

Place: Second Runner Up

Class: 3B

Name: Oh Eun Young Charmeine

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! Santa went into the toy shop and bought some toys. Then he used his two large bags to carry them.

  He looked so tired because the bags had to many toys inside. Santa Claus didn’t see the stone on his way and tripped on it and he fell down. “Ow! Ow! Ow! it hurts!” Santa shouted out loudly. I rushed over to Santa Claus and asked him why doesn’t he carry the presents one by one? He agreed and did exactly as I said.

  In the end Santa gave presents to all the children around the world and they said “Thank you” and became good friends. 

Place: Winner of the 2016 Writing Competition

Class: 3C

Name: Chung Ming Sum, Bethany

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! He went to a toy shop and he bought a lot of toys. I heard him said “May I buy these lovely toys?” “No problem” said the cashier. I saw the presents were three hundred and ninety-four dollars. It’s so expensive.

  After that he puts all the presents in his bags. It’s so heavy! Suddenly he tripped on a stone and fell down and all the presents fell out from his bags! Poor Santa. Then, I went to help him to stand up and to pick up all the presents. “What a good girl” he said”. It’s late now let me bring you to my home and have a big supper. “Thank you, Santa Claus” I said.

  Soon after, we went to his home. It was big. I saw so many dwarfs, they were tiny and cute. It was dinner time; I was so excited the food was tasty. After that, Santa said “You were very helpful today”. What presents do you like?”. “I like storybooks” I said. “Here you are” said Santa. I saw a toy car filled with storybooks! “Thank you!” I said happily. “You are welcome” he said. Later I pulled the toy car and went home. 

Place: First Runner Up

Class: 3C

Name: Raven Ian Peter

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! He went to a toy shop. I saw him buying a lot of different toys like toy cars and teddy bears. Then he walked out of the toy shop, carrying two big bags with toys in them. He walked towards a park.

  There was a stone in front of him, but he didn’t see it. He tripped on the stone and fell down. The toys in the bags fell all over the place. Some of the toys were broken so Santa Claus had to buy some more.

  There was a gift shop nearby so he went in and bought keyrings, books and more. Then I saw him heading to the bus stop. A bus was already there, so he went on it. I guess he is going back home to unpack his toys. Then on Christmas day he would give them to all the children over the world. I’m hoping I get a football for Christmas. 

Place: Second Runner Up

Class: 3C

Name: Ng Wai Shun, Wilson

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! I saw him buying a toy car from the toy shop. It was red. After that, Santa puts the toy car into a bag and carried the bag away. I followed Santa Claus because I was wondering what his face looks like, and I wanted to see it.

  Santa didn’t see the stone in front of him and he tripped over it. His bags fell onto the ground and the toys inside fell out.  I rushed over to help him put the toys back into his bags and helped Santa Claus to stand up. Santa was so happy so he said “Thank you, I’ll give you an extra gift this Christmas”. He gave me a toy car.

  Then, he found his reindeer and flew away. “Ho, ho, ho, presents for all the children tonight at midnight!” Santa Claus said. I looked at the toy car and thought, this car looks smaller than my toy car at home. Never mind I thought, at least I have an extra toy for my brother and I walked away. 

Place: Winner of the 2016 Writing Competition

Class: 3D

Name: Lee Chun Sin, Chester

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! He was buying toys in the toy shop. He had a big filled with toys. I was so excited seeing him around town.

  After he bought some toys, he carried the big bag of toys to the children’s houses. Santa said “I am only going to give presents to the children who’s houses have Christmas trees, and for the ones that don’t have any Christmas trees they won’t get any”.

  Suddenly, Santa Claus tripped on a stone and fell down. The toys inside the bag crashed on the ground. I went over and helped Santa to carry the bag. Santa Claus said “Thank you so much young man, I will give you two presents because you helped me”. I was so surprised! I had two lovely presents now. 

Place: First Runner Up

Class: 3D

Name: Wong Pak Wang, Alfie

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! I saw him entering a toy shop to buy some presents for us. After that I saw Santa carrying the presents around to our homes.

  He was very tired and so careless. He tripped on a stone and fell down. I ran out as fast as I could and helped him to pick up all the presents that he dropped on the floor. He said “I was a helpful boy”. I was really happy. 

Place: Second Runner Up

Class: 3D

Name: Yu Anson Pak Yan

  I saw Santa Claus in Hong Kong yesterday! When he arrived in Hong Kong. He went to the toys shop and bought some toys for the children. Then he carried the presents, but the bag was extremely heavy and felt very tired.

  On the road Santa tripped on a stone and he fell down. He was in a lot of pain. Santa managed to stand up and picked up all the toys he dropped.

  In a magical moment he ran to every children’s house to give them all a present. We feel very happy to see him. 

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